You Know What I Mean!

You Know What I Mean!

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Each time we share a contact;
Sometimes it’s just from eyes,
Sometimes it’s from the throbbing heart and smiling face,
But each time we share much than that.

We share a simple gesture,
Yet that means a lot.
Those collisions of our repeated eye contact,
Those collisions of our repeated unsaid words.

Every feeling buried deep inside the heart,
But every time we manage to control that fake smile pretending; to be smart.
Because we feel, like we are giving respect to others soul,
Again two flickering bodies remain as a single whole.

Why we don’t approach;
Why we just pretend to be that lonely ghost,
Away from the feelings;
And far more away from the loving role.

Sometimes I feel; to express every bit of my emotion,
In front of the anonymous girl.
Who is a part of my dream, for the last Friday dawn,
But I end up with some messy thoughts and classy reasons like a con.

Β© Abhishek



January 9, 2018 at 11:35 pm

“Every feeling buried deep inside……”wonderful expression of new generation.

    Abhi Raj

    January 9, 2018 at 11:58 pm

    😊 Thanks for going through..


      January 10, 2018 at 12:07 am

      You are most welcome,dear!!

Parnika Preet

January 10, 2018 at 12:16 am

Great writing πŸ‘Œ

    Abhi Raj

    January 10, 2018 at 9:36 am

    Thanks for going through 😌


January 10, 2018 at 4:54 pm

That feeling ya! Amazing work!! Beautifully pennedπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

    Abhi Raj

    January 10, 2018 at 7:54 pm

    Thanks a lot! 😊 And it’s more hearty as you felt this one…


      January 11, 2018 at 10:06 am

      Most welcome! πŸ‘

Nishita Singh

January 10, 2018 at 7:45 pm

The poem was beautiful. But I’m sorry for what I’m going to ask. Do you have Physics as a subject? It was the first thing that came in my head after seeing the word collision πŸ˜…

    Abhi Raj

    January 10, 2018 at 7:51 pm

    Thanks for going through😊
    yup physics was a part of my curriculum,but it was same as it is mentioned here,we never had a perfect one! πŸ™ˆ …
    weird is the better version of one! 😊

      Nishita Singh

      January 10, 2018 at 9:57 pm

      ahh… I see. Anyway, keep up with the good work 😊

        Abhi Raj

        January 10, 2018 at 11:18 pm

        Stay tuned πŸ™ˆ


January 11, 2018 at 1:57 pm

Love this one!

    Abhi Raj

    January 11, 2018 at 2:39 pm

    😊 Thank You


January 12, 2018 at 6:19 pm

feelings in every line … loved it

    Abhi Raj

    January 12, 2018 at 6:32 pm

    Thanks a Lot πŸ™‚

Chandni Asnani

January 12, 2018 at 9:14 pm

“Those collisions of our repeated unsaid words.” This is so deeep! I loved the way you expressed your thoughts here, that eye contact, and smiles, and resisting the urge to express our feelings to the one we love secretly, haha! Beautifully expressed, Abhi. How’ve you been? πŸ˜‡

    Abhi Raj

    January 13, 2018 at 10:10 pm

    Thanks a lot πŸ™ˆ It’s more pleasing that you connected the right dots and perfectly…

      Chandni Asnani

      January 13, 2018 at 10:24 pm

      Haha, yay! πŸ™‚

    Abhi Raj

    January 13, 2018 at 10:12 pm

    I’ve been good! What about you… Connecting after soo long

      Chandni Asnani

      January 13, 2018 at 10:27 pm

      Ahaan, I am good too. It’s just that I don’t know what to write, so then I don’t read anyone’s posts too. πŸ˜† It’s good to talk to you after so long, Abhi. 😸

        Abhi Raj

        January 14, 2018 at 7:19 pm

        πŸ˜… Same Here… now keep going

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